My name is Xeon I came to Earth 20 years ago, I came here because my home planet Geyser was destroyed by an invasion. My best mate Hugwaffle and my wife Zukrethra insisted that they came with me on this adventure. For us to survive we had to do the unspeakable and use our T.P. to take a human form, My wife copied a tall, blond and blue eyed human, Hugwaffle copied a fat human that had glasses and a beanie and I chose to copy and stocky and hansom man wearing a suit. When we left our home planet my wife cried "Why do we need to leave?" "Because it's for the better of us" I replied.
It was a nice story but your missing a few commas. You didn't quite finish in time and didn't complete all the questions but thats ok. It's good that you added some dialogue in there at the end. it was a good read but a little short. It's cool how the characters copied humans on earth.
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